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Concrete Angel

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This is a Naruto style. Naruto is the girl.. Naruko. I would laugh but it is to sad to. Sasuke will be the boy... who I believe was already abused and killed, either way that is what happened to him. I will add more stuff for fun. Sorry if you find I said Naruto instead of Naruko.
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I was walking to school with my lunch. I was wearing the same dress as yesterday.
" Hey look at Naruko with the same dress as before. He is a loser." Sakura said to Ino.
" Hahahaha, Yep." Ino agrees. They are the ones with the nice clothes and brag about it.
I sat down in class next to an empty seat to everyone else but my only and best friend was sitting there.
Sasuke always wanted to learn stuff at a school but his parents didn't let him and beat him as well. His brother felt bad and put him out of his misery.
The teacher was doing roll call and looked down at my arm witch had bruises and cuts. I tried to hide them after a while. The teacher continued away. I bet she wonders but she won't ask.
I walk with Sasuke to my favorite spot and I talk to him. People look at me like I am crazy. " Sasuke? Did you ask Itachi to kill you?"
" Hmm? Why do you ask?"
" I wanna know if he can do the same for me? I wish I was never born." He stared at me.
After the chat, we left and I walked to home, slowly. Once I get home my mom screams at me. She kicks me to the ground and hits me. Then she goes to the kitchen. I try and get up but fall back to the ground. Mom comes out with a knife.
" Why did you come late!" She screamed. I started to scream. MOm set the knife down and walked away. That seemed to get her away. Sasuke came up to me and helped me up. He tried to that is, forgetting I can't feel him. He goes right through me. I get up and walk to my room.
Later I was supposed to be in bed but I look out the window to talk to Sasuke.
" How are you doing Naruko?" He asked.
" Good, you?"
" Same. Today is the day, Naruko. Are you prepared to leave?" He asked. I started to cry but nodded. He flew over and tried to hug me but again couldn't. " I am sorry Naruko. Don't cry. Please it hurts me." He said about to cry. " He flies back over and points at the door.
" NARUKO! WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME! LOOK AT THIS!"  She screams and points at her arm witch was bruised because of beating me before. She grabs me and screams more and more. Sasuke watches knowing he can't do anything. I look over scared and mom hits me. " WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT YOU...!" I blocked out the rest. She pushed me to the corner and started hitting me. Father came up to late and I was pretty much gone from life. He called the police force.
" We are sorry sir but..." Itachi said looking down. " But your daughter is gone." Itachi stopped and started to sob. He, also like me can see the angels. He looked at Sasuke and sobbed. He mumbled. " I am sorry Sasuke. Forgive me."
" I told you I already do Nii-san. Thank you." He faded and he was gone.
A few weeks later, my body was buried and everyone was sobbing. Sasuke was standing in the middle of the people starring down. He then turned and walked through the people. My father was crying screaming out. " I AM SORRY NARUKO! I WAS TO DRUNK TO STOP YOUR MOTHER! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE MY SELF!"  Itachi walked up and put his hand on fathers back.
" Calm down. I feel your pain." He trailed into a cry and curled up into a ball. " I am sorry I couldn't help your daughter or my brother!" He screamed out trying to keep calm.
" You lost a member to? I am sorry?" Father said.
" I am abused my self, not as bad as Sasuke, but I can't stop them for me or him. I can't stop my own clan."
" Did you say Sasuke? Naruko alwawys talked to the air but called it Sasuke. What is that about?"
" He is now an angel and not many people can see them but me and her can. She is now as well." They continued about that. Mother was arrested and later Itachi and Sasuke's parents were two. I am now an angel with Sasuke. This is how my life ended.
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THE END
Please stop child abuse. The song this came from is Concrete Angel. I will make another about Alyssa Lies except it is Sasuke Lies. Don't get mad about it. It is not my Song or Characters.
Song: Concrete Angel
Characters:
Girl: Naruko(Naruto)
Angel boy: Sasuke
Cop: Itachi
Rude girls: Sakura and Ino
Mother: Kushina
Father: Yonadime(Don't know how to spell. Sorry)
I couldn't Help but cry at this. I hate child abuse. Please stop it!
Alyssa(Sasuke) Lies: [link]
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DeathLee28's avatar
It's so painful to see children being abused They are just too innocent to experience it....

...all that pain inside from thier past...

...coming back to haunt them...

...it's a terrible thing for a child to deal with...

...I want to help stop this.............

.................Because i was a victim as well....

....From my father......

...Emotionally and physically...